Poetry Thursday: the spaces in between

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Are you still worried
about that participle
you left dangling?

That inelegant phrase,
that wobbly metaphor,
that questionably situated adverb?

Never fear,
fellow traveler.

There is no “done”
when it comes to ideas
on a page
and not even “almost”
will work better
than “awful
with a beating heart.”

nobody loves
your beautiful words.

They love
the way they feel
between them.


Image by Leszek.Leszczynski via Flickr, used under a Creative Commons license.


  1. “poetry thursday – the spaces in-between” … love this … such a feeling of freedom … anything goes … infinite openness just got bigger … “life is and that’s ALL that counts … no more judging – no more amounts!

    we see the crescent moon but we know there’s more … what we cannot see, we can’t ignore!

    love and light … anna

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